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help with chinese?

Post  Sammi on Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:56 pm

Hihi! So for my last year of highschool I was enrolled in chinese 2! *Fun...* This summer I effectively forgot a TON of my chinese that I learned.... So I was wondering if anyone could read this and tell me if it is correct?

I have to write 5 diary entries and here is the first!

2010年7月23日
今天,我的朋友来我家。她是16岁。他12年级。她是从美国来的。我们一起去购物。
以后,我们看了一场电影。我们也吃日本饭!

2010 nián 7 yuè 23 rì
jīntiān,wǒ de péngyǒu lái wǒ jiā。tā shì 16 suì。tā 12 niánjí。tā shì cóng měiguó lái de。wǒmen yīqǐ qù gòu wù。yǐ hòu,wǒ men kàn le yī cháng diànyǐng。wǒmen yě chī rìběn fàn!


7/23/10
Today, my friend came to my house. She is 16. She is in 12th grade. She comes
from America. We went shopping together. After, we saw a movie. We Also
ate Japanese food!


i'm not sure about the 以后,我们看了一场电影。sentence.... is it right? does anyone know? And yes... my diary entry is very lame!
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Post  Corsica on Sun Aug 22, 2010 11:11 pm

I only took half a year of Chinese, so I am not the best source of information. But here are my comments.

I'm going to play picky on this one because I want you to get a good grade on this assignment. But you are probably right on most cases - check your Chinese book for the final say just in case.

2010 nián 7 yuè 23 rì ----> Sounds good.

jīntiān,wǒ de péngyǒu lái wǒ jiā。----> Understandable, but there might be a smoother way to phrase this.

tā shì 16 suì。tā 12 niánjí。----> Same as above.

tā shì cóng měiguó lái de。----> Can you take out shi in this one? And can you make a compound sentence with the two previous sentences?

wǒmen yīqǐ qù gòu wù。 ----> Sounds good.

yǐ hòu,wǒ men kàn le yī cháng diànyǐng。 ----> Can you say "women kan le dianying"? (It seems like you're stressing that you saw only one movie."

wǒmen yě chī rìběn fàn! ---> Sounds good.

It sounds good overall though.
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Post  AutumnBaby on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:14 am

damn it!!! i posted a whole page full of comments and corrections and i worked so hard on it but i lost it!!!! Crying or Very sad
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Post  Corsica on Mon Aug 23, 2010 11:55 am

Aw, I hate when that happens.
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Post  Sammi on Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:25 pm

Awww i'm sorry! D8
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Post  AutumnBaby on Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:51 pm

*sigh* i had so much hope for it... cuz my first language is Chinese... anyways, i'll type it up again when i have my confindance back... (pretty soon...) Very Happy
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Post  Sammi on Mon Aug 23, 2010 8:06 pm

Yay! Really? thank you! >.<
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Post  Corsica on Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:08 pm

We should have a "talk in Chinese" thread somewhere here so we can all practice.
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Post  Sammi on Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:26 pm

I'd fail terriblely! We didn't really learn anything useful for normal conversation in my chinese class!
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Post  AutumnBaby on Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:56 am

haha, tat's ok
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